Great song.
It sounds kinda hissy in some parts. Maybe EQ your cymbals some more. Other than that great song.
Great song.
It sounds kinda hissy in some parts. Maybe EQ your cymbals some more. Other than that great song.
Good originality
I love the fact that you are thinking up new stuff, seriously that awesome. But you need more in the song, its not enough. Simple is good but too simple leaves the listener like "bleah..." Oh and if you right click on your tracks and click on fruity slicer (I assume you are using FL Studio) then drop that break beat ontop of that then you can f#@% with the beat more and make it more interesting.
Kinda bored with it
Kinda just sounds like everything else everyone is making, not much originality.
Right
Wow
Great overall feel and it really gave me a good mental image. You can never hate on a song that makes you picture a cartoon in your head.
Very sterotypical (spelling?)
It's a cool song but there is really nothing in it that sets it appart from all the other dance songs I have heard.
Wrong category
Great song but I think trance or drum and bass would be a more appropriat place for it.
Reason is for cheaters!!! Lol jk
No but really great song!
To amazing for words...
I love this song, I was like the third person to rate your song and totally forgot to review it when it came out the first time.
Great Leveling
As far as presentation goes your's is almost perfect, you have great leveling and mixing. As far as melody and the catchy factor you kind of fall off the page. I know its a mix but I have heard other mixes that do better with melodies and bass.
Thanks anyway :)
Could be much better.
You could use a little more punch to your kick and possibly a little more bass. Your arps are very cool but to many of them at the same time can distract from what the feel of trance is supposed to be. Thanks for the review and crit on Blueberry Pie by the way if you would rate/crit my other songs I would appreciate it.
Ok, thanks for the feedback. Ill try to implement these elements on my next trance song. Even tough im more into metal now.
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